( zsitvaij | 2007. 08. 30., cs – 11:39 )

HSI reconsider its vote -> HSI to reconsider its vote vagy HSI reconsiders its vote

'because of these bribes': nekem kétszer kellett elolvasnom hogy megértsem, addig a pontig konkrétan vesztegetés nem volt említve.

Utolsó bekezdés nagyon elhamarkodott:
It is also known that since then, new members have been inaugurated to the committee of the HSI, where the only requirement of membership is a fee of 100-200 euros. Many of the new members seem to have tight relationships with Microsoft.

szerk:
Sőt, szerintem nagyobbat ütne ha mellőzné az olyan fordulatokat, hogy 'it is also known that' és 'seems to have'.